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Tuesday, 13 April 2021

y6 awesome walk up cook's cove by Raphi

aaaaa I say getting up for the day 'what today is the day' i say 'we are going up cook,s cove''. i get ready and get to school i say to kako Pip and koka Rozie'good morning' and then after the bell rings we get but into groups.my group is Jackson Finn Raphi Troy and Abay. me and jackson sit in the very back it was fun we called ourselves the back bros. we did lots things in the back like having a little party when we where listening to the music. we got there and fins mum did not't know where to go so i showed her because i have done this before. 


we 'yes ' i say we got there late because abay got car sick  but we got there cooks cove! i got in my new group. aaa i say this is sooo much steps again.this is going to be a lone walk we get up like 18 steps and im puffed sweat dripping down my face we keep walking till i see light 'light light' i say we get a gate so we have to climb over on steps!!! ok its not that bad it like 2 or 3 steps and then we have to walk up hill and then we get to a metal statue. when I look down i see the camp it's so empty i can see it so clearly i can see the playground.


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1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Raphi,
    I like the way you started with aaaaa. It really hooked me in.It reminds me of the time I went to milford sound. But next time start with a capital letter and try to spell koka write too.

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